Tuesday, February 17, 2009

tiring tuesday

18th of February
south conservatory
6:51 pm

Headache begins to kick in. I can feel the weight of my body bogging me down. People chatting beside our table is not helping at all. Amidst all these I cant stop thinking about you. I can keep my mind off the thought that you are still somewhere in the middle of nowhere where the world is free to think stuff about you, criticize you and stare at you. Damn, once again I feel the pain from the headache that is tormenting me.

As I look outside I began to think of that things that might happen to you. I then looked at my phone, still no message from you. As I saw the clock displaying "17:05", I began to feel some relief, knowing that its still early. "Maaga pa. Wag ka magalala. Tsk." I begin to utter these words in my head. "Kasama naman nya si pare, safe un." Gah. I then paused for a while to think of what i should or could be doing right now. Hmm.

  1. Eat
  2. Eat ice cream
  3. Study playing the guitar
  4. Go to Mineski and play
  5. Eat?
  6. Write a blog entry
  7. Update my multiply
  8. Text you
  9. Call you

Shit, the thought of you in danger once again crossed my tired and headache tormented head. I tried reaching for my phone and try to dial your number but I suddenly remembered, "Lay low pare." Arghh. I then managed to let go of the thought that I should call you.

God, I hate being a pessimist. I always tend to picture you in danger. Argh. I can't blame myself though. How I wish.. nevermind.

this is my first attempt to write a blog entry. leave comments or tips on how i can improve on my writing. O_O




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9 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 17, 2009 at 3:56 AM

    Wow, everyone's getting a blog nowadays. XD Anyway, there there! Who ever that person is, I'm sure he or she is okay. :3

    -Cara

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  2. rawrmonsterFebruary 17, 2009 at 3:58 AM

    im a little bit worried because its late and shes still not in plurkworld. O_O

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  3. King Curse MarkFebruary 17, 2009 at 4:02 AM

    Wow, I love it, you're so open sa blog mo..

    whoever the girl is, yeazz naman..

    its cool you have a blog..

    follow kita ah..

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2009 at 4:08 AM

    Cool story bro.

    lol, trolling aside, if you want comments on the writing and stuff - I say just write them as how you want it. It expresses how you feel etc, it doesn't need to be perfect, just readable. And this post is readable so npnp

    Stop thinking about me. bleh :3 Well, just try to search think about it first. You keep of thinking of her (i'm assuming it's a her. unless you're...), so go think about her. Ask yourself why. How. When. Search yourself for the feelings and reflect.

    ...then post and tell us about it. :>

    -aylliaylli <3

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2009 at 4:09 AM

    lol finally posted it. xD

    aylliaylli here for ya <3

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  6. @jennaFebruary 17, 2009 at 4:25 AM

    stop being too emotional! hahaha. inspire others. think and write about happy things!

    you are a good person :)

    jenna

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  7. chAaDdFebruary 17, 2009 at 9:24 AM

    You could improve your writing by trying it on other stuff other than drama *which btw, your blog is verry smashing*

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  8. JulieFebruary 18, 2009 at 2:32 PM

    speechless.

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  9. She WritesFebruary 23, 2009 at 2:51 AM

    HA! okay. I'm here. Hmmm.. tama sila. stop being emotional. :)) nako. dapat may happy things din dito a? :p

    - jha

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